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i cry

I have always wanted to tell you,
what you mean to me,
but whenever i go to u um scared you wont believe,
i cry

everytime i see you,
i think of what we had,
the way theings used to be,
i cry.

in the slience i try and find my self,
the person i once was
the person i was when i was with you
i cry

i take the memories with me
as i try and move  on
i pull my confused self together
and cry

~brittany~

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Written August 26th, 2004

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  • lonelysoul224
    September 12, 2004
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    This poem i can totally relate to. I loved it. keep up the awesome work.

  • Eturnal-Tiger
    September 2, 2004
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    Wow this a fantastic piece i hope things get better for you it had a nice flow to it great job