Music in the backround
Drowns out the screams
Which hide the sorrow
Sorrow caused by loss
The loss of one's sanity
can only happen
when one is pushed to the edge
I watch the people
slowly getting pushed to the edge
by the MADNESS
of CRIME and BLOODSHED
only hunmanity
is to BLAME
for it's
SUFFERING
Author notes
Written September 2nd, 2004
A contest entry
- sadness and darkness and anything society dosent like. by Emo Cowboy14.
1200 points, ended June 8, 2007, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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powerful emotion here and i would have to agree with romantic requiem here, i can hear that belted out to some hardcore black metal
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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i like it. good job and good luck.
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I could imagine a hard core musician screaming this! how wonderful! it makes my ears happy YAY
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pop, Humanity is to blame, but so is the world. the world opresses humanitys sperituality demoralizing us and tormenting us with the pleasure of distruction.
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