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No Matter What

Your wounded spirit I gather close to my heart
Warming it, feeding it, healing it, with my small art
I will not let you fall abandoned alone in the dark
Nobody on a journey like yours, alone should embark
I've watched this darkness dance in your eyes
I've felt your nightmare's in the middle of the night
I've felt you shudder with unwanted life
I want to gather you close and inhale your tears
I want to ward off any unwanted fears...

No matter where you tread
I want to be there with you
No matter your choices
I'll stand next to you.
No matter what .

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Written September 1st, 2004

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  • Neon Highway
    May 14, 2005
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    It's amazing.... simply riveting I loved it and I adore your poeticnessness


  • DragonFyre
    November 7, 2004
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    I love this poem so much love. Every time I read it it becomes my favorite again.
    Thank you


  • LaAmyaArlene
    October 22, 2004
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    Awe... I loved this poem, it was sad, but had so much love in it Great feeling to be inlove..oh how I miss it


  • Dutch Doll
    September 7, 2004
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    Thanks for the awesome comment, starry night, I REALLY appreciate it
    ~ Moon


  • starry night
    September 7, 2004
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    this is so great i mean really great. i cant think of anything really to say i want to express how i feel about this but its just not anything i can put into words that this is personal and that no matter what anyone says its great and how you feel about it should always be how you feel dont let anyone influence you on it. i mean i wish i could accually do what this poems says for some of my friends because there like family and i'm not sure that accually makes sence but great poem and i'm sorry if i got of the topic.


  • Ivy Rose silver member
    September 5, 2004
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    Very Good!!!

    Ver good poem. Very intense and personal; yet has a nicely creative form to it. I think you have quite a poetic talent. Keep writing and keep growing...expressing yourself. Thanks for your generous comments on "One Galaxy."


  • trumpetfalcon silver member
    September 2, 2004
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    Wonderful expression of your devotion and love. A fine write and all my best to you


  • Nicolisis
    September 2, 2004
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    Poetry Par Excellence!

    This is beautiful Adri! It speaks volumes of the love you have for your special one - I love the rhythm and flow to it, it flows beautifully making poem easy to read and digest. I wish I could write like this. Luv Niky xxx


  • Dutch Doll
    September 2, 2004
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    Thanks, cutie... funny, I went to click on your page to see if anythings new and I get a comment your so sweet.... you remind me of my Krimson, your personality is like her a lot!
    Anyway, yeah I kinda noticed it went from big to small... weird... didn't mean for it that way... I actually hate but love the ending... it means a lot to me but it sucks on this poem,,,, but thanks !!


  • Neon Highway
    September 2, 2004
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    I liked how it started big the got smaller, awesome format The poem itself, well put it this way, its another victory for you and just another poem I am honoured to read. You have serious talent aunty moon you'll go far
    twilight


  • DragonFyre
    September 1, 2004
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    You blow me away. This is so good. This is how I strive to write. I am not the poet you are.

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