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Beneath the Blushing Moon






Blushing beneath the mystical white moon

Where I imbibe colour and sound and scent

In that still valley by the still lagoon,

Foretell new storms to those already spent

Love, like the magic of wild melodies,

And all the Furies issued at the Vent.

With radiance so fair it seems to be

Gods ! how his eyes with threat’ning ardour glow!  

Along my pulses, yearning to be free

With liquid love--all things together grow      

And fill my bosom with celestial fire

I'm not a star. I'll never let you go...

Rapture of mystic love, and so inspired

Into the night these wafts of rich perfume

But I am caught by ravishing desire

Should claim thee and the leaping flame consume

Your soul is as a moonlit landscape fair,

In this amazing darkness, in the gloom

A blissful rapture we discover there.

A thousand trembling orbs of lucid dew            

Whilst, as it were, they cleave the waves of air;

And left her legs and thighs expos'd to view:

And wrapped in fabrics red as sunset flame.

And now, will shew thee how this Passion grew

Would that my heart could comfort you the same,

And mad with rage, yet lovely to behold:

And joy was in my heart like leaves aflame.'   

Dipt all in crimson streaked with pink and gold;

Of fire and lust! Two flames, two Semeles

No longer by vain fear, or shame controul'd

And I, enslaved, have learnt to sing for thee.  

A sense of joy so wild 't is almost pain,

As carries them into an ecstasy,

            I've tried to break the spell of it -- in vain.

In the blind dark with wolf-winds overhead.

Ah, Moon of my Delight who know'st no wane,

Still urges, and a fiery deluge, fed                     

A butterfly its fall had dispossessed

But when the night her drowsy mantle spread,

Across the threshold. Something came and prest

Of endless depth, o'erwhelm'd with ragged stone,

Blossoms the shining fulness of your breast.

the breathless hour that lives in fire alone

Their glittering courses through the blue abyss.

He is a Thought; he is not flesh-and-bone;

The trembling Universe—suns, stars, grief, bliss—

Then, one by one, bathed in the beaming flood,  

O Love! in such a wilderness as this,

Where the pale lustre of the moony flood

Within thy veins is all the fire of day

Throbbed with the fitful pulse of amorous blood,

But I true Passion's soft commands obey,

With interlinking arms and flying hair;

Impell'd by love, I wing'd the airy way;

And shouts of rapture fill'd the perfum'd air!

And voices passion-hoarse, or shrilled with fright,

The shrieks and moanings quench the screaming air,

With them my heart glides on in golden flight

Throbbing with human passion, yet devine

My Love, thou art my way, my life, my light.




'Tis love that makes the heavens shine

-- I marvel that God made you mine,

Author notes

For those of you who missed the contest rules…. These are not my words; just my arrangement of other poet’s words into my own poem.  Every line had to be by a different poet; needless to say, with so many lines it wasn’t easy.  I checked and rechecked and I’m still not sure I didn’t miss something, so I may revise this later.  There is also one line I want to change, but after intense searching I was unable to come up with an acceptable alternative.  I hope you enjoyed reading this and if you caught any mistakes let me know.  

Patti

Here is the list of poets I used and the links to the poems.


Blushing beneath the mystical white moon
L'Envoi ~ by Mathilde Blind
oldpoetry.com/poetry/15730

Where I imbibe colour and sound and scent
Her Hair ~ by Charles Baudelaire
oldpoetry.com/poetry/11347

In that still valley by the still lagoon,
The Moon Flower by Lala Fisher
oldpoetry.com/poetry/26122

Foretell new storms to those already spent
The Rape Of Lucrece ~ by William Shakespeare
oldpoetry.com/poetry/1524

Love, like the magic of wild melodies,
The Poet's Love Song ~ by Sarojini Naidu
oldpoetry.com/poetry/27185

And all the Furies issued at the Vent.
The Rape of the Lock by Alexander Pope
oldpoetry.com/poetry/13213


With radiance so fair it seems to be
Juvenilia, An Ode to Natural Beauty ~ by Alan Seeger
oldpoetry.com/poetry/26999

Gods ! how his eyes with threat’ning ardour glow !  
Thebais - Book One - part II ~ by Pablius Papinius Statius
oldpoetry.com/poetry/27417


Along my pulses, yearning to be free
Insufficiency ~ by Elizabeth Barrett Browning
oldpoetry.com/poetry/228


With liquid love--all things together grow
The Witch Of Atlas ~ by Percy Bysshe Shelley
oldpoetry.com/poetry/1698

And fill my bosom with celestial fire
To a Lady on Her Coming to North-America ~ by Phillis Wheatley
oldpoetry.com/poetry/16748

I'm not a star. I'll never let you go...
"Above our submarine's black nose she rises ..."
by Konstantin Simonov
oldpoetry.com/poetry/31474

Rapture of mystic love, and so inspired
Ave! (An Ode for the Shelley Centenary, 1892)
by Charles G. D. Roberts
oldpoetry.com/poetry/4670

Into the night these wafts of rich perfume
The Fruit Garden Path ~ by Amy Lowell
oldpoetry.com/poetry/14444

But I am caught by ravishing desire
The Georgics ~ by Virgil
oldpoetry.com/poetry/2096

Should claim thee and the leaping flame consume
Shelley ~ by Henry Van Dyke
oldpoetry.com/poetry/9861

Your soul is as a moonlit landscape fair,
Clair De Lune by Paul Verlaine
oldpoetry.com/poetry/29816

In this amazing darkness, in the gloom
The Neophyte ~ by Aleister Crowley
oldpoetry.com/poetry/18345

A blissful rapture we discover there.
Charade ~ by Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
oldpoetry.com/poetry/28094

A thousand trembling orbs of lucid dew  
Sonnet LXIII: The Gossamer  by Charlotte Smith
oldpoetry.com/poetry/18221

Whilst, as it were, they cleave the waves of air;
Book II - Part 02 - Atomic Motions ~ by Lucretius (oldpoetry.com/poetry/28780

And left her legs and thighs expos'd to view:
Metamorphoses: Book The First by Ovid
oldpoetry.com/poetry/18265

And wrapped in fabrics red as sunset flame.
Fungi from Yuggoth ~ by Howard Phillips Lovecraft oldpoetry.com/poetry/33021

And now, will shew thee how this Passion grew
From The First Act Of The Aminta Of Tasso ~ by Anne Kingsmill Finch
oldpoetry.com/poetry/26796

Would that my heart could comfort you the same,
Fasting ~ by Emily Pauline Johnson (Tekahionwake)
oldpoetry.com/poetry/25949

The world is wide, but yearning makes me bold
To The Unknown God ~ by Antero Tarquinio de Quental
oldpoetry.com/poetry/30111

And joy was in my heart like leaves aflame.'
The Portrait ~ by Siegfried Sassoon
oldpoetry.com/poetry/31296

Dipt all in crimson streaked with pink and gold;
Dawn in the Mountains ~ by Charles Harpur
oldpoetry.com/poetry/24548

Of fire and lust! Two flames, two Semeles
Glance, The ~ by Francis Beaumont
oldpoetry.com/poetry/9727

No longer by vain fear, or shame controul'd
Times ~ by Charles Churchill
oldpoetry.com/poetry/5242

And I, enslaved, have learnt to sing for thee.
Sonnets - Ad Innuptam ~ by Patrick Moloney
oldpoetry.com/poetry/25005

A sense of joy so wild 't is almost pain,
A Rhapsody Of A Southern Winter Night ~ by Henry Timrod
oldpoetry.com/poetry/28669

As carries them into an ecstasy
An Hymn Of Heavenly Beauty ~ by Edmund Spenser
oldpoetry.com/poetry/4904

I've tried to break the spell of it -- in vain.
The Wanderlust ~ by Robert W. Service
oldpoetry.com/poetry/21439

In the blind dark with wolf-winds overhead.
The Dead Moment ~ by Muriel Stuart
oldpoetry.com/poetry/26308

Ah, Moon of my Delight who know'st no wane,
The Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam ~ by Omar Khayyam
oldpoetry.com/poetry/7297

Still urges, and a fiery deluge, fed
Paradise Lost: Book 01 ~ by John Milton
oldpoetry.com/poetry/23298

A butterfly its fall had dispossessed
Range Finder by Robert Frost
oldpoetry.com/poetry/30300

But when the night her drowsy mantle spread,
Jerusalem Delivered - Book 05 - part 05 ~ by Torquato Tasso
oldpoetry.com/poetry/33105

Across the threshold. Something came and prest
The Legend Of Lady Gertrude
by Ada Cambridge
oldpoetry.com/poetry/10480

Of endless depth, o'erwhelm'd with ragged stone,
The Mirror for Magistrates: The Induction ~ by Earl of Dorset Thomas Sackville
oldpoetry.com/poetry/4730

Blossoms the shining fulness of your breast.
Ivory And Rose ~ by Louis Untermeyer
oldpoetry.com/poetry/32496

the breathless hour that lives in fire alone
Fire in the Heavens ~ by Christopher John Brennan
oldpoetry.com/poetry/21165

Their glittering courses through the blue abyss.
The Spirit of Poetry ~ by George Essex Evans
oldpoetry.com/poetry/30879

He is a Thought; he is not flesh-and-bone;
Texas Cowboy ~ by Karle Wilson Baker
oldpoetry.com/poetry/6115

The trembling Universe—suns, stars, grief, bliss—
Night ~ by Victor James Daley
oldpoetry.com/poetry/25824

Then, one by one, bathed in the beaming flood,  
The Moon Flower ~ by Lala Fisher
oldpoetry.com/poetry/26122

O Love! in such a wilderness as this,
Gertrude of Wyoming ~ by Thomas Campbell
oldpoetry.com/poetry/10480

Where the pale lustre of the moony flood
Extracts From Leon. An Unfinished Poem ~ by Joseph Rodman Drake
oldpoetry.com/poetry/638

Within thy veins is all the fire of day
Flame ~ by George Sterling
oldpoetry.com/poetry/31454

Throbbed with the fitful pulse of amorous blood,
Charmides ~ by Oscar Wilde
oldpoetry.com/poetry/2495

But I true Passion's soft commands obey,
Love Elegy, to Henry ~ y Amelia Opie
oldpoetry.com/poetry/14583

With interlinking arms and flying hair;
Like polished marble gleam their limbs left bare;
Symphonic Studies (After Schumann) ~ by Emma Lazarus
oldpoetry.com/poetry/22858

Impell'd by love, I wing'd the airy way;
Heccar and Gaira ~ by Thomas Chatterton
oldpoetry.com/poetry/5675

And shouts of rapture fill'd the perfum'd air!
Petrarch to Laura ~ by Mary Darby Robinson
oldpoetry.com/poetry/18682

And voices passion-hoarse, or shrilled with fright,
Inferno (English) ~ by Dante Alighieri
oldpoetry.com/poetry/11545

The shrieks and moanings quench the screaming air,
Hyperion ~ by John Keats
oldpoetry.com/poetry/781

With them my heart glides on in golden flight
Quiet ~ by Wilfred Wilson Gibson
oldpoetry.com/poetry/31300

Throbbing with human passion, yet devine
Chopin ~ by Emma Lazarus
oldpoetry.com/poetry/22856

My Love, thou art my way, my life, my light.
To His Mistress ~ by John Wilmot
oldpoetry.com/poetry/16662

'Tis love that makes the heavens shine
The Triumph Of Love ~ by Friedrich von Schiller
oldpoetry.com/poetry/27254

I marvel that God made you mine,
My Springs ~ by Sidney Lanier
oldpoetry.com/poetry/941


Written September 1st, 2004

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  • AngelSeeker silver member
    September 14, 2004
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    When I started this I thought it would take maybe a week to find enough time and another to put the lines together. (Maybe three or four weeks all together, because I couldn't work every day.) It took me much longer, because I had to have lines that I felt really worked and not just ones that were acceptable. There was also the problem of keeping track of so many poets and not reusing any as I kept trying to do. I can't tell you how many times I found a perfect line and it was by a poet I had already used. LOL The last week I even considered giving up with maybe 10 lines left. I just couldn't stand to stick anything that rhymed but wasn't relevant to what I was trying to convey in there. Right now I can't even say for sure that I won't change a few line around after the contest is judged. I have an idea to make it better, but I'm going to have to spend some time doing it. Thanks for the comment. I'm glad that you liked this.
    ~ Patti ~


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    September 14, 2004
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    I had to click on and read this
    Blushful Moon
    I thoroughly enjoyed it
    You have done something that would take me days to do
    I can imagine the work involved in this
    Kudos to you for undertaking this feat
    Do come and see me also
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • glazecovered
    September 8, 2004
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    In response to NurseChilly - I suppose as a moderator you would know best what is allowed and what is not, however there have been many cento challenges in the past, it is a poetic form used by many, and it is not considered plagiarism by most.

    AngelSeeker - what a beautiful Cento you've written here. I think you did a terrific job putting the lines from all these different poets together - I'm sure it was a lot of work. Great job!

    ~Anastasia


  • AngelSeeker silver member
    September 6, 2004
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    Thank you so much for clearing that up. I love knowing the story behind the Cento; and you did and excellent job of explaining things. ~ Patti ~


  • sanity
    September 6, 2004
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    It is only plagerism I think if you do not give credit to the person who originally wrote it, as all poets are mentioned this wonderfully crafted poem can not be classed as plagerism.
    This is a definition aof a cento
    Cento

    In Latin, a cento is a patchwork. In poetry, a cento is a work composed of lines from works by other authors. Examples include "The Dong with a Luminous Nose," "SemiCento" (multi-lingual!) and "Familiar Lines.

    This is something else that is said about patchworking or cento.
    A patchwork poem is just what its name says it is--something patched together. It is also called a cento, from the Latin for patchwork, and by some, a mosiac poem. It is a verse composed entirely of lines or phrases from the work of other authors. A patchwork poem can be rhymed or unrhymed; it can be assembled with emphasis on lines, or the lines might be chosen because they contain a focused concordance of a specific word.
    It's not enough to simply choose random lines; the patchwork poem itself should make some kind of sense. Only if some humor centers on the use of truly familiar lines can a mere nonsensical patchwork work--as in the best-known cento in the English language, the poem titled "Familiar Lines."
    The cento evidently originated in ancient Greece; examples are found in Aristophanes's plays where lines have been usurped from Aeschylus and Homer. Roman poets, as early as the late second century, lifted lines from Virgil, as did the fourth century Latin poet Proba Falconia, ninth century Waldram, and seventeenth century Scottish poet Alexander Ross, writing in Latin.
    The earliest extant patchwork poem in English was published in 1775, written to celebrate Shakespeare's birthday. It was comprised of lines from Shakespeare's plays, though the author took liberal poetic license in changing the lines to suit his purpose. The purist refuses to change even the tense of a verb--the trick--the challenge--is to create a new verse, while staying true to the original lines as they are placed into their new mosaic. So I think we are safe in the knowledge that this is not plagerism................

    take care
    sanity



  • AngelSeeker silver member
    September 5, 2004
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    The contest rules did state that this type of poetry was allowed on this site; and that is wasn’t considered plagiarism. All poets were also given credit for their work; and I did state that it was only my arrangement of the words of others into a poem that reflected my thoughts.

    I couldn’t say for sure, but I’m also not sure that using one line from a poem would be considered plagiarism… after all if you think about it how many times does someone come up with the same line simply by accident. I’ve also seen many poems that used others poetry or words as a lead in or even a thought in their poems or books. If at some time in the future it is decided that this form of poetry is not acceptable I will of course remove it, (although since I put so much work into it, I’d be very disappointed.) I just hope that doesn’t come to pass. Thank you for your comment, and I hope you will let me know if you discover the answer. Thank you for you comments. Patti


  • NurseChilly gold member
    September 5, 2004
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    I'll add to this as it was in the featured as I hate points being wasted.. but I'm not altogether I agree with this ..as it's a form of plagairising others works.. I'm sorry.. but that's just how I see it.. although you put so much work into it.. I still am unsure of the legalities of this piece????

  • Ladybug1962
    September 3, 2004
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    Wow, this poem was a truly rapturous piece, and what a way to get there! What an idea for a poem. YOu obviously put alot of hard work into it to make it work and it is awesome! Nice job I hope you do well in the contest!


  • Almighty Aphrodite gold member
    September 3, 2004
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    For rearranging words and lines, this turned out to be truly delightful. I thought this was completely original until I read your author's comments, but that doesn't make the piece any less beautiful. I admit that I don't read that many things from Old Poetry, but perhaps I should. You extracted every line from each of these works (which I'm sure took a great deal of time and effort) and blended them into something all your own. What wonderful work! And now I know the secret of the cento. I love how multifaceted the work seemed--how each of the lines were like individual voices, blended into one harmonious chorus. Well done!

    Wishing you the best of luck in the contest...

    Many blessings,

    Raven Aurora

  • el desdichado
    September 3, 2004
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    Truly, incredibly, fantastically epic! Yes, that's enough adverbs for now. I loved this...I had no idea what was going on, but I thought, hmmm, some of these sound familiar...and it didn't feel like a "whole" poem written by just one person. There seemed to be many, many voices layered one over the other, each speaking, each echoing the other. This must've been an exhausting journey! It's like hunting down all these painters, borrowing one brush from each, and then painting your own landscape. And what a landscape it is! VERY nicely done! I am beyond impressed. I am speechless (well, not literally, but still).. ! ~EL d


  • layla.
    September 3, 2004
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    you have said it! marvellous and very unique.
    thanx for sharing and best of luck!
    ~~ille


  • sidewinder silver member
    September 2, 2004
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    it's interesting what one can do with a combination of different things!
    I did enjoy this!
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill
    Edited on Sep 02, 5:51 because ''.

  • Momentaryhappiness
    September 2, 2004
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    This is really good, and clever, the way you took a different poets line and made it work as a poem must have been hard.
    Its surprising how well it fits together.
    Well done

  • pestilance
    September 2, 2004
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    you did a wonderful job doing this, it was excellent, i had to keep sipping my tea to remind me that i was at work, , these poets are excellant you did a great job arrangeing them to make something truly unique,


  • hichristina
    September 2, 2004
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    WOW! this is awesome. I loved the way you put all those lines together - amazing! I thought it was an original piece - and pretty damn good at that! lol, awesome job - it all flows so beautifully

    cheers

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