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My love I need you to see

My love I need you to see
How much you mean to me
three little words can't say
how much i need to show
The love i have for you

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Written September 1st, 2004

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  • Fools Paradise
    September 10, 2004
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    awww... its Short but it gets your point across, and sometimes those are always the best, because some people can drag it on and on when they dont have to. Its very sweet, you can see/feel the emotion behind it as you read it!

    great piece!

    -M

  • LiL TwInKlEz
    September 1, 2004
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    great job

    Short but sweet.. Always the best poems to read.. Great job expressing urself in that short space..Awesome! -twinklez-