The sunset dips into the sea
Asleep for another day
Only to rise in the morning
To chase the moon away
It awakens the rooster
Cock-a-doodle-do
As he begins to crow
A new day dawns for you
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40 words
Written September 1st, 2004
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Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a nice comment on my poem. I appreciate it. Take care, Sandy
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somewhat surprisingly, i've gotten what seems like quite a few poems that run along this same theme in this contest. (i don't know why that's really such a surprise. but it is.)
i think this is charming. i like the sort of duel between the sun and moon.
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Thanks for taking the time to read my poem and leave such a nice comment.
I appreciate it. Take care, Sandy
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No kidding... I have a rooster and when he starts to cock a doodle do... there is no escaping that new day dawning... this verity is true.
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Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a nice comment on my poem. It was for a contest where you could only use 40 words to write a poem. Take care, Sandy
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Alsome!!!!
Aww this is cute a new dawn is in my mind a new day to live a tommrow to change the things from yesturday. Wonderful wirte here sandy .
God Bless
Mary
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