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"There is nothing that should
       Ever take your heart away
       From what it is you wanna do.
       You should always go with what you love,
       Don't follow no one else,
       Just do what's good for you...Tell 'em
       Dreams are real, all you have to do is just believe...
       Sometimes people try to bring you down,
       They wanna see you frown,
       Just keep your faith in you.
       Doesn't matter if they try to tell you
       That you'll never make it,
       This is what u do...Tell 'em...
       Dreams are real, all you have to do is just believe..."
                      Ashanti~Dreams




and heres just a funny quote to add: Luv is a sensation caused by tempation, the guy sticks his location into the girls destination,to increase the population for the next generation. Do you understand or need a demonstartion?

Author notes

I chose that song by Ashanti called "Dreams" because it inspires not only me but everyone else. I think it is abosolutely true and beautifully put! Not to mention she is my FAVORITE singer hahaha!! then i just added the other quote for fun heh
Written September 1st, 2004

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  • Catressa gold member
    September 15, 2004
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    awwww this was pretty but now i want to leave you a little poem from when I was in High School don't laugh and go what way back in the dark ages?? ha ha ha

    Me LOVE ME SELF
    Me LOVE ME SO
    ME TOOK ME SELF
    TO THE PICTURE SHOW
    ME WRAPPED ME ARMS
    AROUND ME WAIST
    ME GOT SO FRESH
    ME SLAPPED ME FACE!!

    HA HA HA I still have the folder I wrote that on...
    To think that is some of where the madness of my poetry began.. Cat


  • knots untangled
    September 1, 2004
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    thats great, i always loved the humorous one! and actullay, my girl rennie is the only one from chelmsford that says i have to pee like a race horse, but she also says i ahe to pee like a shit monkey, don't ask. but the rest of us say i gotta pee man! or at leats, my friends and i do!
    -Meg