I am going to tell everyone about my cruise!!
It was sooo fun!
I wan only on the shit for a night
and then I got killed
But I had the best time of my life
I went swiming in the pool of blood
and then I hate maggots for dinner!
IT was sooo GREAT!
Then I got killed by these people in all white
one was hott
I fucked him after he got killed as well
I loved it!
We are living together now in hell
he sure is cute with his burnt off roated face
and moth eaten clothes
He likes to get me in the butt now
It kinda bothers me
But it's allright I guess...
Oh I should tell you guys about my the doctor!! Ya I should
He told me I was dead
It was kinda sad
But I am still going strong
He said that I was raped an beaten to death
on the cruise
damn
what the fuck was that?
Author notes
ok I don't know what is going on people
Written September 1st, 2004
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I did the background on purpose.... Noemally people would have to highlight the shit to see it, so I did that to see if people would actually do soo, thanks for the ummm somewhat advice though
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Hey, I could barely read this. It's an odd one, but I do like the way you write. You write for the reader, for the audience, many people do not do such. So in doing so, there is a lot of potential here. BUT YOU SHOULD CHANGE THE COLOR TO LIKE BLACK OR SOMETHING THAT STANDS OUT SO IT COULD BE READ BETTER. -
heh.
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I think I am possesed dude
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Who is writing this michelle? What the fuck, I read it and it was so weird, like nothing you've ever written before, it doesn't even seem like a peice of you....
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hey it happens....lol. anyways...this was differnt but cool, sorta like a mindless rambling, but don't be offended by that i do it all the time, but i don't really post them because i write it on paper then usually lose it on accedent...lol.
well anyways...good stuff.
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Well, this is pretty crazy, if you ask me, but I do like the style you're using here, it makes it intresting as you gone on. Nice job.
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