My eyes scan over the words silently.
Ones of heart wrenching pain, unending tears.
All written by a girl young of heart,
Incapable of handling this heartbreak thrown at her.
I find myself lost in her words of agony,
So I read back farther.
Now I find similar words of love
Ones just as strong as those of pain,
Some deeper than a teenager should be able to feel.
Yet this young boy still doubted her!
It absolutely blew my mind.
She had given her all to him,
Not only in heart and soul,
But in her most complex words as well.
I'm sure if you'd examined her eyes,
You'd see it amid those deep pools of hazel.
How could he have missed it?
Perhaps if he'd seen it, he would have stayed.
This girl has become but a stranger to me,
Yet she still manages to live within my being.
Author notes
#1, written for my ex - sort of a bitter sweet "look I've moved on" poem
I wrote this in my car. Almost killed myself a zillion times
Written August 31st, 2004
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i hate it wheny our sitting there thinking something wanting to write it but trying to miss the pedestrians, good for you hun, im glad you wrote it and i enjoyed it as always.
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this is a great piece - good flow. great word choice to get across your emotions. nicely done, keep up the good work! <3
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smiles . .very powerful . . i liked the rhythm and flow
the best seed planted has no chance if in unfertile soil. .
chance and luck are integral parts of success and love . .
excellent colour . . i shall to try it . .so vibrant . .
life is about lessons and reactions
yours is a positive one no matter the words
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This was good! I liked it a lot! Please don't crash in your car!
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