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Bravest Soul

When heaven calls upon you
You shall be remembered
As the kindred spirited person you are
Always putting your feelings aside for others
Giving a helping hand to friends and
Never expecting something in return

Your inspirational words have reached
Myself as well as many others
When I feel I am losing faith I turn
To your inspirational poems
Breathing in your words
Reminding my soul of the faith
I almost let go of

I envy that you live in such a beautiful
Country such as England

You quote Ernest Hemingway
“The world is a fine place and worth fighting for”
Your quote was more inspiring to me
“We only have one go at this life and
This planet lets make the best of it”

You are young only 27 years old and
Life has not been happy for you
And yes you are right
Life will be much happier once you are free
Of all the nightmares you have had in your life

You have been through so much heartache
And the worst was when
You were just a little girl.
Your inner child cries to be held
For in my heart I know she is still there
Scared to come out
Don’t be afraid I am here along with
and everyone else who loves you
Taking it day by day you are overcoming all your heartaches

You are the bravest soul I have ever known

Author notes

In my heart you are the bravest soul I have ever meet.
Written August 31st, 2004

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  • BehindTheEyes
    September 16, 2004
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    Wow, this is so nice and so pretty. RoughRider told me to check you out. Glad that I did. You're a great poet!!!

  • listen
    September 2, 2004
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    congrats on the gold.you definitely do deserve it.ttul

  • RoughRider
    September 2, 2004
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    Honey you deserve the GOLD you worked so hard. And I told you Freewill would love it. Congratulations!!!!


  • freewill
    September 2, 2004
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    congratulations on the trophy. Please know you got it because you followed the rules better than anyone who entered and wrote an awesome poem. Well done

  • freewill
    August 31, 2004
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    I came back to read it again before going to bed because I knew it would make me feel happy. Thank you so much!
    PLease keep writing ... I want to see 10 poems in your list before long!!!!


  • August 31, 2004
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    Beautiful

    Sweet Poison you are a growing talent. Que linda nina.


  • freewill
    August 31, 2004
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    wow this is incredible! Well done honey and thank you. I love it! Good luck in the contest

  • RoughRider
    August 31, 2004
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    Beautiful

    Honey you are amazing! You have such a beautiful thing here for Freewill. I am sure you will be pleased!


  • Nour Beydoun
    August 31, 2004
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    I don't know what to say.. I'm glad you look up to such a wonderful lady..
    Good luck in the contest baby,
    Your big sister, always so proud of you,
    Nour-

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