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Making Love

Longing to taste your essence
Eagerly clothes are torn off
Taking you consumes me
Sensing your heat, I breathe in your musk

Mutually caressing, stroking you...longingly
Angling on top of you
Keeping contact with those caramel brown eyes
Everything centers on skin sliding on skin

Lunging, rubbing my knee against your swollen      womanhood
Orgasmic waves shuddering through you
Violent waves begin subsiding
Everything I am rests in my arms.

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Another acrostic, not sure whats going on in my head...is it a full moon?
Written August 30th, 2004

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    September 1, 2004
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    I don't know about the full moon, but you are definitely in one hell of a delightful groove here. I have yet to write a decent acrostic that I am pleased with. I think I need to quit reading these.....