Cast your pennies into the Trivoli Fountain
And pray for a safe return
The gauntlet has been thrown
And we shall answers its challenge
A cowardly act was committed
We shall suffer our enemy a mighty blow
It can never end
Not until the country side is purged
Death to all who oppose us!
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Written August 30th, 2004
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you have done it once again...beautiful poetry beautiful image beautiful background...sad to say, the third line in this had me thinking of bring it on-just the word gauntlet...lol...its a long story and completely irrelevant, so i'll shut up...anyhow this was great, iwanna read more @ny0ni+@ lead your life so you can sell the family parrot to the town gossip
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GOOD!
Well, it's a good piece overall... but I'm mostly lost... I think you should explain what the Trivoil Fountain is for. Sorry not all of us are brillant and know all!! HA HA HA...
I think in a sense there are too many hidden meanings through out this write that one gets lost trying to figure out all of them. Nicely formatted, though. Take care of yourself and those you love. ~Star
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