The trees that quiver in the summer air,
Are nothing to the beauty of your mind.
Every bird in flight with a song to share,
Is thorny set against this natural find.
The water sprayed from the great waterfall,
Appears less fresh than your delicate skin.
The fire in the sky begins nightfall,
Imitating gentle beats from within.
The jewel constellations of the cool night,
Are void images to your eyes of gold.
The crisp petals of a rose, pearly white,
No more pure than the essence you behold.
Natures passion remains for all to see,
The blessing of all kinds is held in thee.
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Written August 30th, 2004
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very beautiful poem. I like it. Nice love poem
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Amazing
This is beautiful. I love it. Truly amazing and full of love. I wish you the best of luck in my contest, and I know you will do well.
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super beautiful. perhaps there couldve been more old english etc involved but yes, i like it and good luck
xxooAnna
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'...Natures passion remains for all to see, The blessing of all kinds is held in thee.' This is lovely, SilverScent...very well done...Filled with sincerity & affection...Good luck in the contest...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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He he I know exactly how you feel I love my boyfriend more than anything as well. Wonderful write good luck thanks for entering god bless
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wow-i'd like to know someone who diminished nature so.
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Love this ...feel like your talking about nature and a lover combining the two.
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I truly loved it, so very beautifully written, lots of imagery written into it, there is beauty in the world, we just have to open our eyes and look, for it is there, even though mankind is trying to destroy it, we still live in a beautiful world~angelica
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a beautiful, eloquent write. lovely
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Rhi
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Awwe! this is cute! i really like it. i love the comparisans of beautiful things in nature to the person you love! I would love to just sit and obsserve all those beautiful things with the one i love he makes me feel special. and i can appirceate something a lot more when he is around me.. i guess you feel the same way about your loved one. that's great! hold on to that. even IF the love dies you should feel the memories of how happy you were and keep them safe in your heart. i really like the last line of this: Natures passion remains for all to see
The blessing of all kinds is held in thee.
~that is so powerful! it just strikes out and hits a cord with in my heart which will resonate withing me for atleast the rest of the day! thank you for shareing this poem!
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