Is it just convienent for you,
to give up on yourself Like I.
In the end you will regret it,
if you don't always try.
You could have been everything and more,
but you just gave up on trying.
now you are laying on your floor,
regretting it and crying.
Why let the tears form again and again,
you are just giving up your dreams.
Why expect everything to be perfect,
when things aren't always what they seem.
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Reminds me of Colleen...
Written August 30th, 2004
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I really really like the last couple lines of this poem. Thye really just seem to tie things all together for me. What you wrote about was portrayed very nicely, too. There are so many people now that just give up on themselves and this shows that it is the wrong path to take. Nice work.
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this is really great! just like always i havent commented on any of your poems in a while, sicne i changed my ap name atleast that is, it used to be sweet sorrow. but as i was saying prior to that, this is really wonderful, awesome job.
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That's a nice poem about someone with troubles, just giving up not trying, you should help them you know, not yell at them or blame them for what they have done! Lend a hand and help them off the floor! -
did you write that poem about me?..
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good poem its true i thats whats messing up my life thanks for sharing!!!
-morfi
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