Another night was touched by this devil
A warrior outrages such of rolling thunder
Elusive eyes flaunting from infernal
Moving from dusk comes a Spartan trail
The vision of a beholder comes desire
O’er a patrician nose, look of a knight
Muscled jaw and walks like a hero
Yielding lips, brought one’s to hunger
Darned his behind that slips by paces
Defy and arouse every demure’s holiness
Piece of a kilt envelops a detailed sword
Blocks every artery of a lost maiden
Masonic visage strikes an unspoken passion
Luscious masculinity tumbled thru lunacy
Crumbled such defenses and surrender
Among the boldest of the Greeks’ lancer
Beautiful man of a genuine heart against war
Share thy braveness upon a starving mortal
Plant thy seed down to the road of insanity
Savor the juice of ecstasy beyond illusion
Author notes
Never been tired of writing a poem about a 'Knight' I always wanted to be with!
Written June 24th, 2004
'been a Spartan lover even before "300", what d'ya think poets???
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this was a very nice poem. i really liked it. i never read a poem bout a knight before and this was really good. this poem had a lot of potential and amde a lot sense. keep up the great work
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I think your knight in shining armour is going to come on his trusty steed and sweep you off your feet.
Delicious poem 
Amazon
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you are truly adept at capturing the flavor of the romanticism of the medieval period.your writing does take on the tone of an author of a period piece romance novel.it's like you are a reincarnation of a guinevere.you do this so well and with so much ease.
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hahaha! Yes, I will! And yours too definitely! Thanks again! Keep in touch!
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LOL...oh pish...how you do go on, lol. But I receive the kisses with humble gratitude, and again allow me to say that I found tis to be utterly charming and a wonderful read. And YES, do check out the Highway Man (poem...also made into song by Lorena McKinnett). You will LOVE it! Anyhoo, thanks for that wonderful praise to, uh, MY praise (lol you are too cute) and will check out more of yours later
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10 seconds... hahaha! you really made me laugh! Anyways...I'd like to thank you for reading and commenting as well. Really appreciated!
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Excellent!
Ohhh God... I don't know what to say but that was one hell of a comment! The best one I've ever had since I joined allpoetry, really...bigtime! You were just thousand miles away...if not I would probably kiss the hell out of you...hahaha! Anyways, mwah...mwah...mwah!
You know, I maybe sound crazy but I'm really hoping for this lucsious devil to appear in the balcony as Spiderman did with MJ, lol! That's why I always wanted to stay there at night looking at the stars above!
So I maybe have to search for that "The Highway Man" and Karen Robards, eh... Thank you sooooo much! -
this is a nice historical piece... it captured my attention for about 10 seconds...
k thx
AvMPSLament
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Oooh, hon, you sure you ain't a historical romance writer?? lol 'Cause I would DEFINITELY buy your books! lol I loved this...sounded like a combo of The Highway Man and anything ever written by Karen Robards, lol. Luscious in scope, naughty in coquettish verses and of course swooningly perfect for any damsel who still believes that a knight will appear below her balcony...lol. Charming write!
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Hahaha! Talking about "the knight", you made me laugh! Anyway, thank you so much too for that beautiful comments, it really feels good you know...have a nice day!
Medieval knight my dear!
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This is really good. Very descriptive. I like poems this way. I was able to picture this knight. Maybe not the one you have used as the knight (HEHEHe) But A knight no less. Show emotions, love and admiration for such a knight. Now I wonder if it is a white knight or black. Great write and I will be reading more of your work soon. Thank you for sharing.
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