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Not like you

Would a song tell you how i feel?
Can words show?
This pain thats just so real
The scars that seem to grow
paranioa that eats my brain
suicidal friends
people that think im insane
this pain just never ends
But you know what im gunna do?
I'm gunna be strong
Not like you
Not like you
Not like you
I'm gunna live the pain
live its hour
because im gunna be strong
Not like you
Not like you
Not like you
Not like you
NOT LIKE YOU

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Written August 29th, 2004

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  • Party Monster x 2
    August 29, 2004
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    thats good to hear! *smile* great piece!!
    Edited on Aug 29, 7:44 p.m. because ''.