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Shattered Image

Shattered Image of a broken love,
staring at a reflection, no longer loved,
ask for forgiveness, but cant forgive one's selve,
in this prison you'll forever dwell.
He said that he"d leave you, without a thought,
the murder was perfect, but one trip got you caught.
You couldn't stand him with that other girl,
he just didn't understand, he was your world.
Look in the mirror, with fate in your eyes,
no single tear, how hidden are your cries.
Broken into pieces, between love and hate,
did you deserve, your twisted sick fate.
He's looking up at you, and regretting his lie,
didn't you tell him, liar's always die.
You feel the burning of hell, but the freedom inside,
they look in your eyes, and it's so hard to hide.


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Written August 29th, 2004

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  • zdmckay
    September 7, 2004
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    This was good. Thanks for entering. zee