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My Fat Cat

My Fat Cat
Big
Always eats
And eats and eats
but she's
Perfect
In ALMOST every way

Author notes

This is another one of my horribly weird poems. you may wonder why i'm entering them if i hate them so much. But, I just want to hear other peoples feedback.
Written August 28th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • mymymyohface
    November 7, 2004
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    lol this is silli i hate cats they r mean! thanx for entering!
    ~skyler