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Gone

The memories of you have faded away,
No trace of them in my mind,
No whisper of them in my heart,
They have been abandoned and have gone where only forgotten memories go.

I can't remember the spark that was set between us,
I can't remember the feeling of your lips on mine,
I can't remember the sensation of your eyes connecting with mine,
I can't remember how you made my heart felt.

Your as distant as a neglected dream,
Wandering the shadows of my mind,
Only to know that i won't come back for you,
And that our love is lost to the end of time.

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Written August 28th, 2004

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  • Blackfire88
    August 29, 2004
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    aw, lolly, you have such a way with words! I love all your poetry, your words sound so elegant together...and so sad! I love you lolly i hope i'll see you around school sometime!
    ~Lisa