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Three mean frogs

Three mean frogs
Three mean frogs
See how they jump
See how they jump  

They all jump onto the lily pad
They sit and spit and just look mad
Did you ever see frogs behave so bad
As three mean frogs
Three mean frogs

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SAY TO THE RHYME OF THREE BLIND MICE
Written August 28th, 2004

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  • slick99
    August 28

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    hey, this is pretty good!!! it's cute and sweet!!! have a nice day, -slick99

  • PrincessDewDrop
    August 28, 2007

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    lol this is really cute and funny! I like your poem!
    PrincessDewDrop


    • Sandygram silver member
      August 29, 2007
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      Nice Comment

      Thank you for reading this poem. I did enjoy writing this one. Hehehe. You have a wonderful day. Blessings, Sandy
  • Bob Fox
    June 9, 2007
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    lol

    so cute & sweet. such a pleasent & funny write..


  • BethanyBoo
    May 7, 2007

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    I like frogs but these one sounds a bit mean. i wrote a poem abouwt frogs as well. This poem made me lagh and i sang it to the right tune as well.

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 2, 2004
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    Thank you for the nice comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Take care, Sandy
  • Just4u
    December 2, 2004
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    Cute...an so more true metaphorically than he everything is protrayed to be always so good and sweet...

    Eddy

  • Sandygram silver member
    September 13, 2004
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    Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and leaving a nice comment. I'm glad you liked this one. Take care, Sandy

  • Hoosierpoet silver member
    September 12, 2004
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    This was delightful - very good meter and rhyme - wonderful children's poem. Thanks for entering, and good luck in the contest!

    Moses

  • Sandygram silver member
    September 10, 2004
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    Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I am glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write. Thank you for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy

  • forgotten dream
    September 10, 2004
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    ooo, i can just imagine these three mean frogs. a delightful write, and something that brought a smile to my face as i'm sure it would any child. great job and best of luck in the contest <33

  • Sandygram silver member
    September 9, 2004
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    Thank you for the nice comment. I know what you mean, I showed it to my six year old grandaughter and she won't stop singing it in the car. Take care, Sandy

  • rufina caraid silver member
    September 9, 2004
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    mean frogs! oh what next. - I love your take on this - but I've never seen a mean frog - now if you were talking Toads - yuk!!!
    The tune is caught in my mind now - and possibly will be for the rest of the day.
    ~Von~

  • Sandygram silver member
    September 8, 2004
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    I glad you enjoyed the poem. Another silly contest poem. At least my grandaughter likes it, but I think she might be a little bias cause her grammy wrote it. I appreciate the coment.Take care, Sandy

  • Circuitsboard
    September 8, 2004
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    Cute. Funny. Who'd've thought?
    LOL

  • Sandygram silver member
    September 8, 2004
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    Yea I was happier as a kid then most kids seem today. They grow up too fast and don't enjoy just being a kid having fun. Take care, Sandy
  • bowie
    September 8, 2004
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    good

    yeah, aint it always like that too? I don'r know bout you but I was happier when I was poor.

  • Sandygram silver member
    September 7, 2004
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    Thanks my grandaughter got a kick out of it. She said Grammy, are you a famous writet? . Naturally I said of course.
    Thanks for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy

  • Ivy Rose silver member
    September 7, 2004
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    Excellent

    Great adaptation of "Three Blind Mice." I loved this and I think the kids would love it, too. Just because they would love to see a mean frog spit. Terrific entry into this contest. And, very appropriate for children. I know I laughed. LOL

  • Sandygram silver member
    September 7, 2004
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    You had to rewrite a nursery rhymne so mine was the one for three blind mice. That's how long it is suppose to be. I grew up with no money too. But back in the 50's everyone was poor so none of us kids knew we were poor. Well take care and thanks for thenice comment. Sandy
  • bowie
    September 7, 2004
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    good

    I used to play hopscotch.....im only 15.......

    I guess its cause were we used to live we didn't ahve money for game boy or computers or tv, so we played jump rope, hopscotch, marbles, simming. You jsut have to find the right places for it.

    Your poem was really cute if a bit short sandy. keep up the good work!

    Bowie of the knife and spear,

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 28, 2004
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    Gee someone who remembers hop scotch. Be still my heart. They were the good old days when kids could still be kids. They were truly the best time in my life. The fifties were awesome and COOL. Thanks again for the wondreful comment. Your bio in the giggling group made me laugh. Take care, Sandy

  • August 28, 2004
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    This brings back some memories too, why were they mad and spitting makes me grin as a reader Mad at the kids chasing them maybe, this one would be pretty popular among school kids for sure. The Hop Scotch Girls ring to mind and all the funny songs they used to sing too while playing their games, I;m sure this would be more popular than you think, kids just love to laugh with a poem like this while reciting loudly
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