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Pain (acrostic)

Parting away from you
Anger arising throughout
Igniting my heart aflame
Never to know if anything was true.

Author notes

feh. a bunch of poems will be posted soon more then likely..
Written August 27th, 2004

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  • September 18, 2004
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    hey Sun,
    YOUR SOOOOOOOOOOOO TALENTED!
    whew you express it PERFECTLY!
    it is an honour to dance with you!

    luv always
    LoneStar

    p.s ur on my authors page


  • Scarred Veins
    August 28, 2004
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    10/10

    This is awesome. You pin pointed it exactly.. You leave me speachless.. I dont think i have EVER read something so .. fantastic .. so meaningful.. in so little of words. You definately have talent.. and i am pleased that you share it on here. Thank you for sharing.
    Much respect,
    KL<3 ScaVei <3KL

  • viscera
    August 28, 2004
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    wo0o0ot. that was cool