Birds are singing, sun is shining.
Flowers give out a lovely smell; I think I know what they are trying.
OH! I remember its August, neither March nor May,
I will wish you something right now, every single moment, today.
My dear cute, lovely, sweet, bubbly, humble, humane, beautiful, gorgeous and smart sis,
A MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY.
Your arrival made this day more pure than dew
Many few (me included) are as true as you
Your charm is lovelier than the flowers in our garden
Your understanding and maturity so flourished that you will forgive me before I ask for your pardon
I hope I am not alone, I want whole world to say,
OH! Dear Prakruti, A VERY VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
Your beauty lies in every part of beautiful nature
Sweet and gorgeous is your every feature
You have been a great benefit for me as you are a sis-cum-friend like creature
Sometimes worst but manytimes you are my best teacher
Coz its coz of you that I can imbibe the knowledge’s ray
And thus get the privilege to wish you HAPPY BIRTHDAY
Say your sweetest buh-bye to your last day of being a teen
But do keep the child in you like you have, and remain like you have been.
In this new step towards the future
So remember the past mates (especially nice ones like me) and our Indian culture
With me, everybody, I hope, here pray
For your fertile future on your birthday
(HUGS AND KISSES)
Vichitra Joshi (J.VIC)
Author notes
i will make my sis read this poem as a surprise today evening... 
she says * i was born before you just so that i can make this world better before your arrival *
humn.. these are the reason why you all should be jealous of my sis...
she is sweeter than kim
she is smarter than lessa
she is more dear to me than laura
she is fascinating than holly
she is smarter than emily
she is more bubbly than trilli
she is more beautiful than christina
she is more kind in nature than mellisa
she is more deared than niki
she is more cute than rachel
she is more friendly than aditi
she is more talkative than keri
i can disobey my Lord ( jean ) if she says me to do so
and most importantly, SHE IS MY SISTER
but then i know that you all are such a kind person from heart that you will now love her more than getting jealous...
A messege just to my sis
* was just wanted to test if i can write false and funny thing, so i came up with this poem... 
... happy birthday... 
Written August 28th, 2004
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very good
i like the poem very good nice use of words makes me feel happy
nuff luv jb xXx -
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i like this poem abote your sis it really sweet and cute! -
Great write for your sister, I loved it
Fantastic poem- keep writing because this was a really sweet poem
All the best,
Pozo
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This is a lovely tribute to your sister... how much she means to you... your words says it all... I don't have a brother or sister... this's made me envious... lol joking... Good luck to your relationship and belated happy b'day to you, Prakruti...
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Happy, happy birthday
A HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY ALSO FROM ME
very beautiful poem for your sister Vic. I am an only child so I have no Brothers to write such beautiful poems for me. My birthday was August 24th Jennifer
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HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!!!!!! this was such a sweet poem. I bet she loved it.
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Beautiful!
A marvellous tribute to your sister and such a beautiful sentiment in your write.And wishing your sister, Prakruti, an exubearant birthday and a wonderful life ahead.May God bless both of you. -
HAPPY BIRTHDAY VIC SISTER!!!!!!!!!!! wonders what kind of gift she is getting in return for the comment
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hehe this is great , my m8 did this 4 me on my bday its always a nice surprize , well you just gone offline on msn , so i dunno y , but anyway this is brilliently written happy bday 2 your sis , im sure shell love this
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aaw this is so sweet! I love it! LOL say happy birthday to your sis for me i think its so sweet that you can write a poem for your sister... thats so kind I think your the kindest person ive ever spoken to! well done vic! its truly wicked! i hope your sister feels special, i would lol. well done!!!
best wishes
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Edited on Aug 28, 9:10 because 'soellin mistake'.
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when was ur b-day.. u didnt even tell me??
... anyways.. belated happy b-day to my dear niki... ..
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AWW that was very sweet hehe. I've read a few birthday poems but this was lovely, your sis should be very proud and i'm sure this poem made her birthday complete. I love the month August too, cos my birthdays in August hehe. Well happy birthday Vic's sister, and great poem.
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Cute poem, any sister should be touched to receive something like this.
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Happy Birthday Vic's sister, I hope you have a good one Vic, how could i ever be jealous? grrrrrrr.....now u gotta be nice..hehe. Nice write. Nice sister. Really nice me x
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omg this was SO SO sweet. I mean. I have 2 older brothers who are fabio No older sister. This was such a touching tribute
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I do not know you nor your sister but Happy Birthday anyway. I hope that the day is a good one.
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Happy Birthday SIS!
WHat an awesome tribute to your sis! Happy Birthday Sis! f/
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this was good buddy, I like it alot, I guess you have a lot of passion for your sister, that is good, I wish I had a sister, good luck and best wishes, dragonmaster aka Edward
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aww that's very sweet Vic!! sorry I didn't read it right when you posted it, I was in a rush for dinner. Beautifully written though, my friend. Tell your sister happy birthday from all of us at AP... and I thought you said no one was more bubbly than me I'm kidding. much love my friend!
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Good write!!
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Fantastic poem. It was wonderful. I also wrote my sister a poem on her birthday but it was no where near as good as yours. Make sure to tell her amelia said happy birthday. Great piece!! Thanks for sharing-- Keep writing!!!!
Love
Amelia
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tell her i said happy birthday too, this is a great tribute to i'm sure a wonderful person,,, keep on writing... keep on being... keep on making art... penumbrapoet
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aww! so cute! Happy bday!
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Happy Birthday to your sis! Enjoyed reading the wonderful things you wrote about your sister, it's nice to see that sibling rivalry hasn't taken over the world, just mine
I could never write something so beautiful about my brothr, but if things ahd been different he would have been the guy who I judged all men by...anyways, happy birthday and many more!
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A Happy Birthday to a sweetly blessed child
May all your hopes and dreams travel wild.
May you be greeted each and every day,
as you are greeted upon your birthfay.
May you have many returns of this day to live
for a spirit of beauty has so much to give...
I know you not but Vic loves you so...
and I am in your debt for helping my friend grow.
Best wishes and a very HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
~genielassie~
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wow i thought this was really sweet. i hope your sis liked it coz it would make me so happy if my sister wrote that about me.great job i really enjoyed reading it!!!1 -
Aww this is a great poem! Such a nice happy Birthday poem. I'm sure it was recieved with love as which it was given. I really liked this!
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This is a wonderful way to help celebrate a birthday and honor your sister. I never had a sister, and always wanted one. I have three brothers. I would not trade them .... well, maybe. No, just kidding.
Happy brithday, Sis!
Cheryl
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Awesome job!!! Happy happy birthday!
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Absolutely beautiful. Happy Happy Birthday!!!! The first line sounds a bit like a line from Bob Marley's songs...
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This is a very sweet way to look at your sister, especially for her special day. I liked your rhyme pattern, it gave the piece it's own flair, as well. Good job and happy celebrations!
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