I want to take the blade
And make myself bleed. I draw blood,
How I wish it would stain this flesh terminally.
I feel a solution coming on.
This is enough.
Why can’t I go through with it?
He wouldn’t be in the next life.
I don’t ever want to see his face again.
But I know this is the only way.
Tear-soaked pillows,
I’m drowning in my shaking.
My hands quaver as well…
I know what they want.
It’s over now.
My dried tears remain.
Forcefully restraining myself,
No blood was shed – this time.
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Written August 27th, 2004
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in bed with knives
this time. this time .. he scratched away your pride
with temptation
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Awesome awesome write, your words were beautiful, but I agree, take it from ME, it's not worth cutting yourself over people. Don't waste your time and feelings on them, instead, understand it wasn't meant to be and you were probably too good for them anyway. Rise and overcome. Just leave it to Marie and I to beat this fucker down. And if I may refer to ArianaSecret's comment, hell yes alot of people would care and come to your funeral, myself included. But don't go dying anytime soon, ok? Not until your old and can't go on any longer. Then you have my permission : ). Again, great write, but in the end, don't let people who hurt you drag you down, it's just not worth it.
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Makes you question if you do die, will anyone care? Would they come to your funeral? Or anything like that?
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awww... who is this guy, and let me beat him with my shoe and then get midgets to eat him!!!, hun im sorry
dont be sad, i love you!. .... great poem though!
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hun dont cut over guys....well, I hope you're alright, I understand tho but if u ever want to talk to me, you can IM me at insaneclwnp0sie6 or love is imortal kk bye
love*
ash
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