You sit there in amazement
As you watch a lost and loved friend
Die slowly of pain
But there is nothing you can do
Cause you have had enough of the shit
That they caused you to go through
For me I sit and wonder
Where would I be now
If I was still the friend of this lost one
In my opinion I don't care at all
All I think about is her now I need to help her
But fall short of that help
For she hates it when we help her
My mind is confused of the memories we had
I shouldn't let them get to me
But they do and for one reason only
Cause I still care about the lost friend and does this friend
Know that well that is another story
Cause the friend now does not even speak to me for some reason she has Changed to someone horrible
But who knows what could happen to her
She might just change her ways
I sit here thinking I have lost you and its
But that was not my fault
It was YOURS!!!
Author notes
umm just dont know what to say about the friend so i wrote this hope fully the lost friend will read it and learn her mistakes
Written August 27th, 2004
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Excellent!
hey gurlie, you know me. I was just reading your poems, and got to this one first. It's really good. It kind of reminds me of how I've kind of been acting towards a friend I have. I know it's not fair to her, but I'm trying to live my own life at the moment, and it causes friction with everyone, but I don't mean it to. Anyway gurl, I miss you! write sometime.
Liz (faeriegoddess) -
I love this poem of yours. I truly do not think your poems "suck."
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Thanks for the comment DeadlyAngel
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hmmm very interesting, it reminds me of someone I used to know. Good to know that I'm not the only one that felt this way about someone in my life. Thanks for sharing. Great write.
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hehe i was bored please comment on my poem i would love to hear the mistakes i made well bye bye
DeadlyAngel -
how rude
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