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Hot Guy Bus Song

Hot guy, if you give us a ride
we’ll make out with you,
then we’ll shine your shoe
make out with you’re face,
send you to outer space
but only with your face

cause we’re not whores!
we’re not whores!
shop at outlet stores!

Hot guy it seems you’ve passsed us by
and now we’re oh so cold
Oh wait, hot guy was really old!
Never mind we’ll take the bus

Author notes

writen by my friend and I as we waited for the bus. It sounds much better when we sing it
Written August 27th, 2004

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  • kortne
    April 2, 2005
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    wow i really liked this...lol..it very good and funny too what an awsome song it would make