Trusted you
A friend of the family
You took advantage of me
Stole my innocence
Beat and raped me
I couldn’t walk for days
The doctors whisper
To my mother
Your daughter might
Never be able to experience motherhood
My mother crying
I wonder if she is ashamed of me?
Does she wish I were dead now?
Will God accept me in heaven?
Rocking myself to sleep
Why me I am only 11 years old?
You bastard
You stole my childhood
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Its not about me
Written August 26th, 2004
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i was 10 when i got beaten. i was 11 when the same guy raped me. he was 16 and my first boyfriend. i hope you are alright now. if you want to talk cause i can relate i would be more then happy to. very powerful words. very well done. you have so much emotion in you. it is so awesome.
Truely,
April
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This is a very powerful write!! I know this burden and I woudln ever wish it on anyone, not even my worse enemy.
"I wonder if she is ashamed of me?
Does she wish I were dead now?
Will God accept me in heaven?"
A lot of girls who have had this experience, feel these exact feelings, but what I would have to say to them is, "is she ashamed, no. A mothers love is unbreakable. And when someone goes through this, it isnt ever their fault"
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People that abuse others are just scum. I am sorry this happened to someone you know. My niece was molested when she was about three years old. I know that anger. Take care
Queen
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*jaw drops*wherever this came from....i hope this is never ever you or anyone else.i came close to this once,so this is a personal poem to me and i shivered when "his"name popped up in my mind.
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excellent
Sis this is wonderful!!!!! I am glad this didn't happen to you... Long story short my dad has abused me not really stolen my childhood but i have grown up more quickly than i have wanted to. I am proud of you for writing this. Love you!!
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Amazing
That is really good, and was so sad to read something like that! It's an amazing poem though! A really great write so continue writing! I can't wait to read what else you have to write! It's really powerful and totally great! -
Thank you for the comment, many young girls are beaten, raped and killed. Some by family members, friends and yes of course the obvious strangers. Yes my poem is not about me but about someone I love dearly, so the cursing was necessary for me. I felt an anger that a young girl should never feel. Read your poem tragic and I pray that did not happend to you. Bless you and all.
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this is written from the point of view of an eleven-year-old and it really packs a punch written this way. writing through a child's eyes is so honest, sad and poignant.
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oh my god, that is powerful,
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Oh wow... this is wonderful. I have a poem about rape... it's called Tragic, maybe you'd like to check it out. But your poem is so filled with emotion, the little girl's cursing was a bit much, but all in all it was magnificent. Ever since I wrote my poem, I keep finding more and more on the topic of rape. I'm glad the warning's are out there, but i'm sorry that they have to be.
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Well, I am so glad this is not about you, I've been through similar things, just without my mother by my side, and fortunately I have had one child, though many losses, this really hit a spot with me, and it was a great write, thank you for sharing.
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wow. this wsa totally amazing!!!!! it was so powerful..and...and...just amazin!!!!!!!!! wow, great write!!!
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AMAZING!
Oh.. my.. god!
Krystal! where did this come from?? this is just a wonderful magnificent job! I'm so proud of you baby..
There's a line you need to review, you forgot to add and R to the your
Your daughter might
I'm so proud of you honey!!
Lots of love from the big sister
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i KNOW WHAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN IS FULL OF FEELINGS SHARED BY OTHERS, tHIS IS TRULY SAD AND i AM PROUD OF YOUR COURAGE AND TALENT
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So many children lose their childhood because of monsters...I know I did. Thanks for sharing...
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Amazing
Poison you have rare true talent let it flow. Hope to read more of your work.
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wow this was incredible. great work. the way you expressed the feelings were so amazing. it flowed extremely well too. thanks again for sharing this.
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This is a really sad and shocking poem- it kept me going right to the end. I'm glad it's not about you- but it was still a really shocking and emotional poem, such a shame horrible things like this happen
Thanks for recomending this to me and keep writing
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Thank you Freewill it means alot to me.
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MOOOOOM
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wow that is one incredibly powerful piece of writing. You wrote about it so well as if you really understand what this person is going through.
Hugging you tight cos I know it isn't easy to write about stuff like that whether it is about you or not.
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Amazing
KRYSTAL ISELA where did this come from????? Its amazing honey, but from where??? I am SPEECHLESS!!!
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