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Meditation-2 (deeper)



the surface loam and clay

hide the harder rocks

and when stripped away

harder still are found down

where pick and axe cannot reach
in the deep places dark
within labyrinth mazes there
secret holds harbor the hardest rock
only the desperate look here
hopeful in finding diamonds


~r.

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Written August 26th, 2004

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  • Sau
    February 6, 2005
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    Introspection and meditation are fundamental parts of existence for some, yet they are not even a part of lives of many. You aere absolutely right- not everyone goes deep, but those who go, find diamonds. The inner journey is rewarding even while you move. I can only speculate how wonderful would it be to reach a destination.
    Thanks for sharing the wonderful work,
    Saurabh.


  • freewill
    August 26, 2004
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    beautiful imagery here. thank you for sharing. I like the background you used too.. its really tranquil

  • Libellulidae
    August 26, 2004
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    this is very beautiful. it floods my mind with symbolic images, so very well illustrated by these words. great work and splendid insight. a very suiting meditation for the day. thank you so much for sharing. much love to you and blessings in all your endeavors.