Moonlit
Mist hovering
Immense above heavens pure
Skies watching, waiting peacefully
Divine
Divine
Peacefully waiting, watching skies
Pure heavens above immense
Hovering mist
Moonlit
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I got inspiration for this peice from an entry in my latest contest. It is a Palindromic Cinquain. Although i've written Cinquains before this is my first Palindrome.
Written August 26th, 2004
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short but it floats in the mind like moonlight
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Such a simple poem, yet so much discription. I love the format as well, very original. Nature is so charming. Great work!
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Hi thanks, yes it was three syllables i haven't a clue what i was thinking to miss that one. I've put it right now though.
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This is very pretty and I'm impressed it is both a cinquain AND a palindrome. Palindromes are such tricky, complicated forms. IF they flow one way they seldom flow smoothly the opposite way! It takes a lot of patience to construct.
For syllable count I get 2, 4, 7, 8, 3.
I didn't consult a dictionary so I could be wrong. I just thought I'd point that out though, in case I wasn't.
I enjoyed reading!
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beautiful
I like it...I'm not sure I see where the palindrome comes in, but I'm a little slow, so don't worry.
But the words themselves are beautiful. The descriptions soft and peaceful. Good job.
Keep writting.
Peace.
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