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Twenty Six

Twenty Six:

So I guess I'll never be:
Tall;
Gorgeously sun-tanned;
Husky voiced;
A porn star.


Twenty Six:

So I guess I'll never:
Join the mile high club;
Swim the channel;
Have a soft spot for a pet;
Wear women's underwear.


Twenty Six:

So I guess I never wanted to:
Be recognised in the street
Keep my clothes on on the beach
Live solely in the real world
Taste a lady's underneaths


Twenty Six:

So I guess I'll always be:
Loved;
In Love.

Author notes

...getting old...
Written August 26th, 2004

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  • Runawaytrain
    September 1, 2004
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    Twenty six is not old dear one Try 38 (oh, god, did I really say that?) Really it's not so bad. I still think my best years are ahead of me. That could be a poem... what do you think?

    Just live each moment, and you will make it to 27.

  • Wolfpoet
    August 27, 2004
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    Grumpy old fart Hell your not that old mate, I'm only 24!


  • NurseChilly gold member
    August 26, 2004
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    heheheh POP TART indeed.. yeah yeah.. well if the tart fits wear it ..hehehehh hehehehehheh


  • deldev
    August 26, 2004
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    Thank you Miss Chilly.This was just a little bit of fluff that I've been meaning to write for ages. I'm having one of those days where I get done all the jobs that I've been putting off. However, at least it means that my collection 'Pop Tart', which has been waiting to be finished since Christmas!, is now complete (www.delicatelydeviant.net/poptart.pdf)

    Take care, Del.

  • pozo
    August 26, 2004
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    Lol, this is a funny poem- it made me laugh So well written and from a personal perspective too A great poem, well written and very funny Keep writing because this was great
    Edited on Aug 26, 1:03 p.m. because 'AP is stupid! is nothing like '.

  • NurseChilly gold member
    August 26, 2004
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    Ohh my, it's a shame.. 26.. sheesh I'm 42.. bloody hell Del, you got time yet kiddo.. well not for all the things ahem lololol but heheheh.. live life hun.. live it full on, head on ,crash a little, be brave and burn a little
    But most of be lucky in love

    ~GILL~xxxx

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