One night Stand
Loud music, drinks, smile, dance,
Kiss, sweat, touch, grope, thrust, release
Where’s my underwear?
Author notes
Written August 26th, 2004
A contest entry
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What did you think
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nice, simple, but not quite what i was wanting, thanks for entering
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Really well written!
To the point and very focused - there is a lot in here! And of course, the turn ... the suprise ending is a wonderful addition! I enjoyed this one as well.
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lol for real.... very well dome
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Quite good
i like this but what i want to know is are you talking from experience or are you writing this as if you have just had a drunken night on the town?????????
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