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the Angel's angel

When u walk by, angels sing, they do
My heart, it stops, as I gaze at you

Such radiance, from one so fair
Does shines so bright, I dare not stare

I’m captivated, held by all you do
Amazed at how, god made you

Your hair it flows, so vibrant, free
Your eyes so deep, I’m lost at sea

Your walk, so gracious, butterflies due pursue
To exist in the light, that illuminates from you

For every yin, there is a yang
And for every sorrow, a bird has sang

So when angels cry, this earth it rains
You were created, to sooth their pains

The angels angel, to them you’ll be
I hope one day, you’ll turn, see me.

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Written August 26th, 2004

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  • ice-thorn
    May 31, 2006
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    wow.. superb poem!,, captures feelings beatuifully!