lightness falls,
it's weight crushing inward
on a tired soul,
he is transformed...
one who wanted,
to one who has
one who needs,
to one
who is fulfilled
held fast
in this one, glistening moment
where truth
illuminates all and
exposes
the depth of one's self
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poet
searching for the truth like diogenes search for one honest man. extremely hard i todays world of chaos. keep the faith and happy writing. well done poet.
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that moment
that is the one to live for ye ken
the one where, all of our struggleing reached the climax and we crest. reashing a long desired goal, a much fought for goal, 'tis one of thoes things that is so hard wone, and the moment filles our evera sence, enough to gi' us strength to moove onward to the next path, and tread darkened roads once more... because we ken that if we keep treading, light will fall.
what an uplifting peice this day
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darkness soon grasps us all. great write
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Excellent
As with each of our own character and how through time we might all learn the true meaning of love -
Very good write here
Expresses life in its hidden depths that only we choose to reveal
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