There is so much hate in this world....
Can you tell me why the hell there shouldn't be?
We have wanking arsehole cunts running our lives
Society give you bull while they look as they strive
As they sit in their over priced whistle
'oops I'm sorry did you bleed upon a thistle'
As they drive in their shinny flash motor
'they call this model nigger brown' -
not giving an iota.......
Cottage in the country, Penthouse in the city
'can't you afford the treatment for dying mother'
like they even know the meaning of pity
Although we're to blame because we have the choice
to have these people run our lives
so give it all show them you have a voice
(this one is for all the cunts!!)
Author notes
Written August 25th, 2004
A contest entry
- No Pussy Shit!! Give Me Raw, Opinionated Work! by mikepattonisgod.
400 points, ended August 29, 2004, 12 entries
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good!
great goodnees gracious child.. that rocked.. super spiff-o-matic.. good stuff homestyle fry.. im out.. PEace -
Thank you for your comment, it was a challange entering that particular contest as i don't have much hate in me. off to view some of yours now. Lx
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What can I say? Such beautiful and evocative use of the english language, rarely seen on this site
Kat xxx -
Damn.....this has some bite.
Stripped down and bare.
Awesome piece.
So straight forward.
Thank you for sharing and good luck.
Rodney -
I like this a lot
Plus you get extra credit for the use of the word 'cunt'. Haha nice man...good luck.
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