SUNLIT SKIES
The sunshine dances on the water each day,
reflecting the brilliant sunrise overland,
greets the dawn and chasing the night away.
Mother Nature always has a beautiful array,
painting streaks for her lovely rainbow then,
arch streams in vibrant colors cross the bay.
Wind blows as the white caps start to sway,
splashing water back and forth to the sand,
as the waves glistens from the sunlit rays.
When the sun begins to set at the end of day,
there are colors of crimson, purple,and gold,
blue, as sun disappear like magic into the bay.
If the sun did not shine in the sky each day,
life on Earth would suddenly come to an end,
making the sky always so dark and so gray,
making black the Heavenly clouds as we pray.
Author notes
This is my first attempt at this kind of poem. PLEASE tell me if it is wrong. THANK YOU
Written August 25th, 2004
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This is excellent just like the other one. This is beautifully written poem. It was very much a pleasure to read,
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Thank you so much for reading and comenting. Hope your weekend is going well. Hugs, Sandy
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What a lovely poem. It reminds me of arizona sunsets and the sunsets at laguna beach. I loved the imagery. You did a great job. keep up the great work.
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Thank you for reading an older poem. It is appreciated. Nature is such a pleasure to write about. No matter the season or time or day there is something beautiful to be seen in it. Take care. Bless You always.
Love, Mom
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very lovely sandy i liked the way your words flowed so freely great imagery puts reader in that time and place beautiful scene awsome job of writing keep up the grea work
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This is pretty good, but I think you have one too many stanzas. Good luck to you in the contest.
~*Destiny*~
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