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From A New Friend

Dear Elise allpoetry is waiting for you,
whenever you need us just type in HELLO,
so many of your friends will answer you,
you won't believe how they love you so.

If you need some strength to get you through,
that's okay, they'll be there for you each day,
everyone here is writing poems just for you,
to cheer you and chase all of your blues away.

Don't ever think your a bother to your friends,
when you feel alone and feel you've been unkind,
remember your friends here truly understand,  
they really care about you, they never mind.

They're here to catch you when ever you stumble,
and to lend an ear to listen to what you say,
and no matter what, they will be beside you,
helping you through this, every step of the way.

   

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Written August 24th, 2004

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  • oikevois baby silver member
    May 12
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    LOVEEEEEEEEEE IT!
  • KeepingTheStars
    August 25, 2004
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    oh, and it should be Elise, not Elsie I'm sure it was a typo inyour poem!!
  • pozo
    August 25, 2004
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    A very sweet poem which I liked a lot Keep up the good work Good luck in the contest and thanks for commenting on my poems

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 24, 2004
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    This was so nice for Elise's friend to do. There are so many in need on here. I was trying to help Fine Moods. I was talking every day for two weeks on my home email. She had similar problems but even worse. Sunday she deleted all her poems and left AP, I wish there was more I could have done. She wanted no part of God. She emailed me and said she would keep in touch. I only hope she does. Well take care. I'll still say a prayer for her each night and Elise. Sandy

  • hereonearth
    August 24, 2004
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    Awwwwww!!! SO nicely written for such a great cause . I wrote a poem for Elise too...or Elsie...Anywho, this is really beautiful. I am sure she definetely will get something out of it! She will definetely appreciate it . Great job!
  • KeepingTheStars
    August 24, 2004
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    thank you sandy!!!

    this is very sweet. I have printed it already. I am hoping to send them to her by the first of september. if you'd like you can lend her some support on her page here at AP, but she doesnt often come since she is elsewhere.

    StarrInTheSky is her AP name.
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