So good, does it feel
to hold you in my arms
again…
To feel you melt
in my arms
when we join each other
in bed…
To see that light in your eyes
to hear the love in your voice
to feel that love
once again…
It feels so good
the desire flows freely
between us,
as it once did...
Our kisses bloom,
our hearts open
to each other,
once again…
Now and forever
you and I
as we lie here
in each other’s arms...
Our love flows
freely
between us
as it once did...
© Jonathan Wikkins August 24, 2004
revised February 4, 2008
all rights reserved
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Written August 24th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Pimp up my love poetry by leander.
700 points, ended February 22, 2008, 31 entries
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This poem carries a very tender and sweet message with it
I definately like the second stanza the best here. The image of melting in one's arms when joining together in bed is very good
thank you for entering the contest, I wish you the best of luck!
Leander -
yes, that's exactly what it is, an old g'friend of mine and i have been seeing each other, and we've found the old feelings are still there, and in fact, never left...
and yes, this piece is very accurate to it... -
Hey there Mike. This piece reminds me of when two people have been apart for whatever the reasons are and the feeling of comfort and familiarity and adoration that you feel when they are together again. 'Almost as though one has taken a journey and finds their way back to where they truly belong.
I liked this piece for the soothing voice in which it comes across in when read. It has just enough length to carry through your theme and give us the sense of being comforted with the emotions that may have been put forth to write this.
Nicely done Mike. An admirable write and one that a woman can only hope a man's words can touch upon them in this way. -
I have not read a poem describing love in this fashion yet and it is quite true in both a metaphorical and literal sense.
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You know, I really dig this kind of poetry...there is such a naked honesty and a sincere need to cuddle up against someone's whose heart is beating in sync with your own. Too many times this simple desire is wrapped up in thick adjectives and vague references that end up making this intimate act opaque...not that I don't love THOSE as well, lol. But it is always great to read the stripped down versions of this eternal topic, and in that regards, I offer you a hand in congradulations...great job!
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Beautiful write Mike, such warmth flows from it. Great job my friend
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Oh to have someone feel this way about me...well at least someone who I 'want' to feel this way about me...lol. Very lovely piece. ~sigh
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Very beautiful my friend. Whether simply poetic wishes or the real thing, you have penned a moment that so many of us would cherish.
Quite a lovely piece.
Hugs...
Mary Ann -
I' m also in your side in this topic
Love Flows... by whonrock is a good poem in the topic of love which has no opposite meaning. The poet's poem emphasize having love with combination of two bodies, without vulgar impression. -
Awesome
awww that was so cute! I liked how it just flowed so well...and the emotions of the person in it...or well um you if that was a personal poem....either way it was a great poem! ^_^ -
awww how nice... i like how you descibe your feeling with so little words. love is such a great thing and in this you show it very much!great write...
bird -
Wow- a sensual, impowering yet loving, poem I liked how you wrote this- so excellently drawn Keep writing beause that was fantastic
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Great
Great poem, really gets to the theme without any unnecessary stuff! -
What a sweet, sweet poem. There was so much emotion invlolved. I thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and feelings. I loved your piece. Thank you once again.
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I'd comment more but the color of this writing make it hard to see, will read another day i guess
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There is nothing like that feeling of having someone you thought you lost back in your arms.
Now and forever
remember these words from my heart
will always be true
now and forever
together and all that I feel
here's my love for you. - Air Supply
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Wow! What a sensual piece you have written here & the background just makes it that much more amazing I came by here to return the favor and I'm sorry it has taken me so long. You are such a talented writer, really...Good Job ---Sara
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Awwwww this is sweet and amazing! Great poem of yours! I enjoyed reading this and I found it really interesting. It's very very good. Very well worded and described. I like this piece of work. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing this with us I want to see more.
Take Care,
Fallenangelkt x
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