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Never Forget

I will never forget the way you feel,
or the way your eyes shine so blue.
I will never forget those nights we shared,
or what it was like to be with you.

I will never forget the way they fit,
as our bodies would intertwine.
I will never forget the way you looked at me,
as you said you should be mine.

I will never forget the sound of your whisper,
everytime it would reach my ear.
I will never forget the the rush I felt,
everytime you would appear.

I will never forget the way you smell,
one of the most heavenly senses of all.
I will never forget the way you taste,
one of the reasons for my fall.

I will never forget the way you kiss,
and gently nibble my bottom lip.
I will never forget your tongue meeting mine,
and a beat my heart would skip.

I will never forget how intense it was,
every second we spent together.
I will never forget any of this,
you will be my soulmate forever.

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Written August 23rd, 2004

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  • Lottie
    January 20, 2005
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    oh your so damn good im gonna have to re comment. fantastic, it is so beautifull written i could almost cry with the cruelness of it all, the tender heartbreaking words.....I will never forget any of this,
    you will be my soulmate forever.
    Amazing! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


  • boogp04
    October 12, 2004
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    great poem! I loved your choice of words. Keep writing, I will keep reading your poems!


  • finding myself 84
    August 25, 2004
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    A most beautifully penned piece you've written here. The flow was amazing... let the ink continue flowing. *Sonya*


  • August 25, 2004
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    Once again, I could feel everything you were saying. Great poem!

  • Lottie
    August 24, 2004
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    this was beautiful. really beautiful! xxxxxxxxx

  • Brandys Work
    August 24, 2004
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    OHHH how sweet I really like this it reminds me of every feeling I had and still have for my ex....really love it great write!!! <3brandy

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