can you feel it,
the rain falling?
in my heart,
though it can't.
why is it raining,
but no one sees?
the soul splits,
right down the middle.
candle burns,
no spell to turn.
once light,
as a feather.
heavy chest,
eyes burn.
can you see,
the rain falling?
in my heart,
though no one sees.
~vampira~
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Written August 23rd, 2004
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The rain shadows our sadness, but also washes our souls clean...trustme, I can see it, and feel it too! No spells can harbor your spirit, only the control you possess...but you may find a friend in the flame. ~riddles~ lol Another great write!
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It is SO awesome to have someone that understands what I write, even when I have no idea what I was saying.
Thanks!
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Well if this does it for ya dont read my erotic. You may blow a fuse. LMAO
Hugs and bites, Lady Raven -
emotionsally hot and dark
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thank you del, i have missed you.
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I don't know why you classify this as 'weird'. I enjoyed it, although enjoy is perhaps not the right word. It is sad, but also beautiful and I think the picture you have chosen to accompany it is stunning. Take care and best wishes, Del.
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I can see now
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this is beautiful...you couldn't capture my emotions of feelings anymore than you already have...i feel as if you are speaking the words i have been dying to say...great write Momma! Keep up the great work...
Much Love
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ooo, very differnt, good job
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