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Candy

 



that sweet, sweet man
brought me a box of chocolates
I ate him instead

Author notes

Don't know why I wrote this on... but I really did think is was kind of weird.
Written August 23rd, 2004

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  • Bigmammajen
    September 2, 2004
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    HAHAHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHA

    *gasp


    HAHAHAHHAHAHHHAHHAHHHHAHAHHAHAHAHHA

    oh I so so so needed that


  • Neon Highway
    August 30, 2004
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    LMAO
    THIS WAS FABIO. SORRY ABOUT TH CAPS LOCKS. I JUST HAD TO MAKE IT CLEAR HOW MUCH I LOVED THIS Your certaintly inventive, got a fabio imagination. keep up this amazing humor and you'll go far DID THE GUY TASTE GOOD, OR THE CHOCCIES. if u didn't have the chocs, can I have them great write


  • sidewinder silver member
    August 29, 2004
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    LOL LOL LOL
    and yes I'm still laughing...
    cause i can picture this in my weird mind!
    I did enjoy this!
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • steveV
    August 24, 2004
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    I like this haiku, shows imagination, well done and good luck in the contest...steveV