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Fall

I can’t stand it anymore,
You make me feel like such a whore,
Gripping at my body,
In my head I’m screaming,
Go away,
Stop,
Just stop,
You don’t,
You keep ravishing my body,
Locked in restraints I am,
Crying,
Screaming,
You deceived me,
I kick,
I bite,
I try and fight,
Your grasps to strong,
I can’t get away,
Just stop,
My screams become louder,
Escaping my lips,
Get off of me,
I don’t want you,
Get away,
Stand back,
As I fall.

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this never has happened to me before,but its hard to explain,but yea....
Written August 23rd, 2004

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  • BlackBubbleGum
    August 24, 2004
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    Yeah, the feeling sucks... I've been there. I actually wrote about it, i called it Total Piece of Shite (lol) because the poem sucks too! Anyways, this was an excellent excellent piece, and I'm gonna give you 5 points just because it was so excellent! Nice job, and I hope to read more from you!! Much Love and Best Wishes to you!!

    Kelli

  • Dark Angelic
    August 23, 2004
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    this is and creepy i would not want any thing like this to happen to me or any one at the matter. great job this gave me goose bumps while reading it.