Nothingness
It's on my mind
The nothingness that takes up my time
Nothinness
it's for me
Nothingness
can't you see
The nothingness
in my head
the nothingness
that you have bred
Nothingness
it makes me happy
the nothingness
that takes me away
nothinness
boggles my head
nothingness
it's not nothingness
it's nothing
Author notes
I am demented
Written August 22nd, 2004
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Easy read, good read. I feel that you have potential that has yet to be tapped into. You can write much deeper, I know you can because I can see it. I can't wait till you do. -
This was a real cool poem, I liked it alot, easy, nice read...good work! ~Tina oh Like ur author page too!
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Damn can i relate to this pom, great write i love the constant use of nothing.
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oh thanks! Yea I know I suck at spelling
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few spelling mistakes but like taht matters
lolthis is a brill poem keep it up
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great poem, although it's a bit hard for me to understand it... nice job, it's well written, it makes me think ALOT!
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LOL, yea I just noticed that now! LOL
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For some reason, this makes me think of The Neverending Story. :-).
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