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My Friend

Three days
No
Four actually

And nothing

Don't think it is bad

Oh no
Definitely not bad

I have realised something

Your typical cliche

There are no words
Well there are
Since they are here

But not full sized meaningful words

Just know that I am your friend

Author notes

This is to Trilliana, she asked me to write a poem about her, and, so, I have.
Written August 22nd, 2004

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  • Jaspe
    August 26, 2004
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    I'm sure any friend would be glad to be told that, even in this intricate yet beautifully odd way.
    Peace.


  • neptune386
    August 22, 2004
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    that's a cool write and only a true friend would do that Lewis. rock on.

    ~ alyssa~


  • Trilliana
    August 22, 2004
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    short sweet and too the point there Lewis