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So in love with you

I love you more then I know how to say
I can’t help but to think of you everyday
The only thing I know to give you
Worth more then a rose, a box of chocolates, a card or two
Is to offer you all of my love and my heart
Please hold onto it, don’t let it fall apart
Sweetie the way I feel
This love so magical is it real?
I’ll begin writing this poem
I’ll get stuck towards the end
I guess it’s my new poetry trend
But really there’s just nothing I can say to tell you
From the bottom of my heart, through and true
How much you mean to me, how much I love you
So I’ll keep on writing this poem
Trying to tell you were my heart roams
But there’s only really one thing that I want you to know
There’s really only one thing I wish I could show
And that is how much I love you
I think about you everyday
Your funny smart beautiful and kind in so many ways
When things get tough I want to hold you in my arms and never let go
I love you more then I can show
I’ll kiss your wrists, I’ll make your scars fade
Baby you’ve got me marching in a love parade
I got one last thing to say
There’s only 3 words one way to say
I love you

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Written August 22nd, 2004

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  • dyingsoul89
    September 1, 2004
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    what a sweet poem. you two lovebirds.... hehe. j/k. great write. love the emotion. keep it up.

    crissy


  • Party Monster x 2
    August 22, 2004
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    hehe...loved it...like I said before. Better than anything I could write for you. Love you,
    ~Tamera~ *smile*


  • Whit-08
    August 22, 2004
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    good

    Hey,
    awwwww this poem is so very sweet!!! i love it!!! greta job with writing this poem it has emotion, and it is very passionate, wow this poem, omg i loved it really!!! great job! very very good job and keep on writing ur very good at it!
    keep up the good work also!
    ~whitney~