Take one deep breath,
let it go,
close your eyes,
Step into your imagination,
Caress the blue water,
Walk in the garden of hope,
Breathe again,
There's nothing to fear,
The angels are here,
Let your mind relax,
This is serene,
This is your place to escape,
Your serenity.
Author notes
This is the first contest I entered that I wrote an original,as in not using prewrites so I tried my best.
Written August 22nd, 2004
A contest entry
- An Escape by .
500 points, ended September 5, 2004, 32 entries
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awww thanks and you are welcome,and thank you everyone for the comments
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This was lovely, I know I enjoy escapes, and it all comes together the way you write it-thank you. -
This wasn't my kind of thang but I could still dig it. Well done.
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It's insane but this is exactly How I look at finding as in your title serenity. The key is breathing. You've got it! use it!
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i like this poem...it gives people who live in the dark hope...like it is a fantasy land they create in their head where they can escape the dark. I liked it great job!
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