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Pooh Bear

do you think you love me?
do you think you care?
do you think i'm the one
to call you pooh bear?

do you think I love you?
do you think I care?
well if you do
you're wrong for sure,
you evil pooh filled bear

Author notes

still very unfinished!!
Written August 22nd, 2004

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  • IrisUnseen
    August 29, 2004
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    u know what- i think you're wrong. it looks pretty durn finnished to me. but don't give up on it just cuz i said so! ...besides... you like, stole my phrase when you wrote "still very unfinnished!" in ur authors comments. curse you! you, you, evil pooh-filled bear!!!!


  • IrisUnseen
    August 22, 2004
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    heee heee heeeeeeee