Beauty is more than the eye can see
Beauty is what's inside of me
It's much more than long black hair
And has nothing to do with the clothes you wear
Beauty is not even physical
It's more about a person's mental
A positive attitude and a bright personality
The ability to look further than the eye can see
A person who's honest and always sincere
And treats everyone with love and care
Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder
It's what you learn as you grow older
It's something you gain over the years
Take this knowledge and pass it on to your peers
Share your wisdom, your words of the wise
You may help someone else open up their eyes
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Written August 21st, 2004
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Beautiful
Yes, I agree that all things you described in your poem, "Beauty" are beautiful attributes to have. Something tells me you have these attributes and that is how you recognized them and are so wise.
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very nicely done. very simply done with a great message behind all those beautifully chosen words. great write.
love,
Lil -
This is so true. Good looks only get you so far in life. It's what's on the inside that counts. This is a good one. Keep it up.
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This was wonderful. It's so nice to see an honest, positive poem for once. So many on this sight are negative. I really liked this poem, the word choice was excellent and the message in this only enhanced the beauty of the piece. Great job with this.
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Perfectly written.
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This is great, I really love this...it's so sweet and makes you feel all nice...it reminds me of Valentines day...I don't know why lol. Great job
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I have to say that I think this is truly the FIRST poem I've read on this site about beauty on the inside, written so clearly, in a way everyone can understand and relate to. Wonderful. This just made my day start off with a positive.
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that was AWESOME!!!!! great job!!!! so true so true, yet a lot of people dont realize it...to blinded with material bull shit...but great write!!
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this is great i like it loads thanks for sharing and of course it's true the poem is right good write keep on writing the rhymes made me smile i liked them lots
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This is a beautiful poem. It's got a wonderful message. It also flowed well, although some of the rhymes sounded a little weird. Great write
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I really enjoyed this. It's good to see this in writing, so others can see it and feel good about themselves. All these things are so important, and everyone should concentrate more on these sentiments than if they have the lastest designer cell phone caddy and their hair has just the right style. Good job!
Jenn -
Thank you so much for stopping by. Unfortunately I havent been able to write anything lately. I will try to post something soon. Something positive. Hopefully you will stop by again. Thanks
Sporadic -
This is a lovely poem with a strong, powerful message. Beauty lies within. You portrayed a lot of personal feelings and emotion really well with this, and painted a picture that flowed so poetically. Well done, I hope to read more from you soon. Take care, Kate
Edited on Sep 05, 8:03 because 'missed a line
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Aww...I liked this poem a lot. You did a great job on this piece of work and it expressed such a great emotion. It also had such a great point to it. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your poems in the future. Good luck on your other poems.
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One brilliant Write, Two thumbs Up.
Oh men Dee. WOW, This poem is DA BOMB! You go girl. I'm really feeling you on this write. This is a real ego booster for me. I needed to hear these exact words to give me more confidence in who I am. Your poem flowed "beautifullly". It exudes self confidence and acceptance of ones self. I loved this write, I'm gonner bookmark this one and I amy even frame it. Damn Dee, where'd you get all that talent from. Remarkable girl, truly remarkable. Avril
Edited on Aug 21, 8:26 p.m. because ''.
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