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Just A thought (poem)

:Sigh: like a pin through my heart, you pierce my soul. nothing more can help me now. I'm forever lost into the dark abyss of nothing-ness. darkness covers me with its heavy-cold wings. with its solid breath on my neck, it whispers into my ear "it's OK. everything in the world has to die. this just so happens to be your time..." with that said i tilt my head back, fully aware of what it was going to do to me. and with that, i let it engulf me in its soul purpose in life. to take away all the pain....

"like a knife through my fresh skin, i let the blood flow like my tears. and taking with them, all my pain..... for now...."

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i dont know what the hell i was thinking when i worte this. i was just depressed.
Written August 20th, 2004

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