When everything turns to ashes,
And roads come soon to the end.
A river sinking in desert,
Fading like words in the sand.
Words who's meaning is little,
But mattered so much to me.
That meaning is lost forever,
taken by a heartbroken sea.
And whether I live forever,
or soon will crumble and die.
Those words will never perish,
even when time passes me by.
Author notes
Written August 19th, 2004
A contest entry
- Give me your all... by DismalDreamer.
300 points, ended November 7, 2004, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - In Desperate Need of Inspiration by JustFallingApart.
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nice write
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Well said indeed.
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short and sweet. i really enjoyed reading this. thanks for sharing. good job!
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Awww...yeah this is sweet. I like how "I Love you" means so much to you and how when you say it...you mean it. Many people now of days don't know what these words mean. Very nice write.
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this was really great... i like your use of a river and desert... it was really amazing. great job. good luck in the contest.
Peace.
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good rhyme and flow. good luck.
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this was cool. it had a good flow and yeah i liked it. well thanks for entering and good luck.
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