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Baby Girl

She was born a beauty his baby girl
At birth her dad handed her the world
He rushed to the hospital, the first one there
With a hand full of cuddly teddy bears
All the best things money could buy
He purchased for his baby girl with pride
He showered her with love and affection
He taught her all life's valuable lessons
When she grew old she was so wise
She had experienced so much through his eyes
When she needed him he was always there
There was no friendship that could compare
When she finally went out in to the world
She made him so proud, his baby girl

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Written August 18th, 2004

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  • Diamond
    August 21, 2004
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    You don't even have to try to be brilliant Dee, it just flows naturally from you. Avril

  • sporadicwrites
    August 21, 2004
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    Thanks Av! I'm so glad you like this ! I don't even know where this one came from lol. I am just trying to be as brilliant as you are! Thanks for stopping by
    Dee


  • Diamond
    August 18, 2004
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    Awesome Write

    Dee, this is so beautiful, I love this write. I especially love this part "When she grew old she was so wise
    She had experienced so much through his eyes"
    This is a poem that every proud expectant father should read. Every parent wants their child to grow up and see the world in their eyes and to be proud of the little "Baby Girl" that they bought home all bundled up and full of love. Beautiful Dee, simply Beatiful.
    Edited on Aug 21, 8:17 p.m. because ''.