Locked doors and lipstick
Lust and lots of mind tricks
Finding love and falling hard
Closing eyes and seeing stars
Opened eyed; daylight breaks
Find out that it was all a mistake
Unlock the door and there we part
Oh, the disadvantages of having a heart.
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Written August 18th, 2004
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anger & passion mix
lovely write... closing eyes and seeing stars... opening again and seeing daylight... wow... yah... you are totally experience beyond your age, hopefully you won't find the same mistakes... written awesomely...
take care
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That was an awesome right. It amazes me that you're so young and you can write something that good and true. When I was your age I was out playing in dirt...sheeesh, kids these days.
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Excelent!
Oh so true! It's never worth the aftermath, is it? Ah, oh well, a great writer you are! Keep on keepin' on! -
It was very strong for how short it was, unique i liked it alot. Shows passion and sadness at the same time, very good, keep writing, lots of talent here for sure xXx
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Amazing, this experience is portrayed so perfectly in this poem. The feeling afterwards is one of the strangest, and absolutely no fun. You said it perfectly "Oh, the disadvantages of having a heart."
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